Nice job :) however, the low audio quality and background noise makes it almost unusable.

Here's some tips to help you out:

1: You should look into investing in a quality microphone, phones and computers's built-in microphones will pick up a lot more sound pollution and record poor quality sound, which is why your recording doesn't sound like real life.

2: As you can hear in your recording, there's a lot of background noise. You should always try to record in the quitest place possible, for example a closet or a bedroom away from other people or appliances. If possible, unplug nearby clocks, fridges, ect. to cut down on electronic whines or ticks that may not be noticable by ear but will be picked up in your recording.

You should also record at least a second of silence before your sound effect or voice line.. This will allow you to use the silence as a sample in a DAW, (digital audio workshop) like Audacity. The program will listen to any background noise in the sample and try to eliminate it throughout the whole recording. You can download Audacity here for free.

Always glad to see someone insterested in sound artistry, PM me if you need any more help. :)

-Sincerely

FiveBrosStopMosYT

Despite the audio quality, this is my favorite sound effect because it made me laugh so hard. Thank you MrGrs, you are the best.

extremely nice

peak sound design; this changed me forever as a person