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Constructive Criticism: You got an item!
Zizka
Thursday, February 11, 2021 - 06:23
Hello, I would like some feedback on the art and animation please.
like the style
shading looks pretty good
it's unclear to me, though: is the character reaching for the item or cheering because it received an item? given the oversized head and short arms, I'd probably make it more of a "cheer"...not sure "reach" will work.
Just my $0.02 of course
I like it very much.
Perhaps the item could move from above down before the animation you show starts.
Greetings
Peter
@Boom:
I tried to do the "Zelda thing" of getting an item.
"Perhaps the item could move from above down before the animation you show starts."
I'm not sure I follow. Do you mean as if the item was coming "from the sky" kind of?
Yes, exactly, like coming from the sky.
But I don't know if that is the right thing for your case. (I never have played Zelda, I've only read a lot about it. So I don't know how and where the animation is embedded into the game.)
Greetings
Peter